Sunday, 4 July 2010

The Secret: A Poem In 160 Characters


The Secret

A hidden kiss that lingered in the mote
Whilst lovers would sit too close to touch
Their eyes told tales and spoke of want
As fingers stretched and gently brushed.


say it in 160 characters, then tell Monkeyman

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11 comments:

Caty said...

very nice poem of love!

Monkey Man said...

I was surprised to find your 160 here...pleasantly surprised. Thanks again for playing.

Mama Zen said...

This is lovely!

PattiKen said...

Oh, I really liked this. It is just lovely.

Happy 4th.

Alice Audrey said...

And everyone around them knew the secret at a glace.

Great 160.

Brian Miller said...

nice 160 pete...think this one is going to explode with desire pretty soon. smiles.

Enchanted Oak said...

A lotta love in 160!
Sunday 160

moondustwriter said...

Excellent in 160 - but you speak loudly with 160 char or 160 words

it's gonna be a gr8 week
Pete

moon smiles

artswebshow said...

this is excellent pete

R.S. Mallari (SpK) said...

So you were able to condensed a romantic moment in 160 characters. Love it.

heatblast92 said...

Great one! :)