Poem & Photo by Adam Dustus
Fever pitch, hold my breath
Veiling streaks shine laser-etched
Striking light for splits to save
Raucous chorus of kids through games
Veiling streaks shine laser-etched
Striking light for splits to save
Raucous chorus of kids through games
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Mindless fun, we all need some
Adults drink beer, their little ones run
Mesmerizing these blurs that beam
Blink real fast, call it a dream
Adults drink beer, their little ones run
Mesmerizing these blurs that beam
Blink real fast, call it a dream
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Scores irrelevant through alley cheers!
Gutter balls and lightening smears
Crashing thunder through stale smelling air
About the game, who really cares?
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Marvel at lanes, pick up despair
Talk is why my friends go there
Prompting smiles, making fun
Cosmic bowling, anyone?
Gutter balls and lightening smears
Crashing thunder through stale smelling air
About the game, who really cares?
*
Marvel at lanes, pick up despair
Talk is why my friends go there
Prompting smiles, making fun
Cosmic bowling, anyone?
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*The above poem was written from the prompt I posted for our first
One Shoot Sunday.
Stayed tuned for Round 2 of One Shoot. There will be a new picture prompt &
everyone is welcome to use & share it.
Cheers!
16 comments:
Cosmic bowling sounds sooo fun. Can we all play? Nice one Adam
Happy Dustus Friday y'all
Of course we can all play! Happy Friday, Everybody :)
What fun, I'm joining your game :)
That's the spirit, Cin! :)
cheers
You've painted a delightful word picture with this. Thanks for sharing it.
All the best, Boonsong
All the best to you too, Boonsong. Your blog has some great pictures that complement your posts!
Whoohooo, I'll be there too!!! So good Adam xx
i'm in for a round of cosmic bowling!
loved your poem - thought i could hear the cones fall down...
Me me me !!! If you really don't care about scores, and if talking's the main idea, I am all in, Adam!! :)
Lovely idea, lovely poem, lovely game!!!
I think I am gonna ask my friends here a game of CB this weekend...sounds very inviting!!
fun verse adam...i'll join the party!
excellent piece..looks like adam has booked the One Stop Christmas Party...cant wait to join in..cheers Pete
Looks like we have a party going on! lol Appreciate the comments. Enjoy the weekend :)
:-)
I love Cosmic Bowling! It's a blast! I have to confess the title made me think the poem would be about stars crashing in the universe :)
What a fun light piece you've rolled out here. (pun, pun)
Just a delightful time among friends....nothing better. Heartspell
Thanks for all the comments! Just returned from a few days of a mini-vacation of sorts, so my apologies for not responding to the above comments. cheers
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