The Secret
A hidden kiss that lingered in the mote
Whilst lovers would sit too close to touch
Their eyes told tales and spoke of want
As fingers stretched and gently brushed.
say it in 160 characters, then tell Monkeyman
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11 comments:
very nice poem of love!
I was surprised to find your 160 here...pleasantly surprised. Thanks again for playing.
This is lovely!
Oh, I really liked this. It is just lovely.
Happy 4th.
And everyone around them knew the secret at a glace.
Great 160.
nice 160 pete...think this one is going to explode with desire pretty soon. smiles.
A lotta love in 160!
Sunday 160
Excellent in 160 - but you speak loudly with 160 char or 160 words
it's gonna be a gr8 week
Pete
moon smiles
this is excellent pete
So you were able to condensed a romantic moment in 160 characters. Love it.
Great one! :)
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