Lost Forever:
A Poem By Moondustwriter
Could you really be
the all encompassing
reality that I need
to return to me???
How can an image
an idea
make a difference
for living breathing flesh?
Yet - your words
speak clear
of me
and you
If
I believe
I believe
I will be
submerged into the swamp
of lost forever
for you see
my heart and I
are intertwined
as I would like to be
with
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Thanks to Oddstock for this entrancing picture
(http://www.flickr.com/photos/oddsock/149183149)
19 comments:
"If I believe" - those 3 words just hang there, waiting to tip the balance...and leaves me incredibly curious.
Is our hearts and souls
so intertwined we give all
Must we be lost forever
upon words just spoken
will an image alone last
when time itself moves on
Question only you can answer
Now that's love at work. Excellent expression of the heart.
I've been reading your poem over and over - really curious what it is about - trying to analyze with my mind instead of my heart - maybe a mistake - you're asking questions - not sure to trust yourself - afraid of consequences if you give in - but would love to...?
It's beautiful!
Wowwww, I love this one Leslie! Spectacular writing...definitely the "If I believe" felt there. You did this so well and nailed it. Amazing!
you say some amazing things and kept this one under wraps for one stop..well done my friend..cheers Pete
there is a lot that could be read into this one moon...to what can you believe that you must give up your heart...hmmm...
Im thinking my love affair is over
Dove honey sweet as you are we are thru
love y'all
"submerged into the swamp of lost forever"
powerful
smiles,
This is lovely. "If I believe" says so much. If one has been hurt, this is often the hardest part of all.
I'm not sure why you chose the photo, but I'm picturing a romantic meeting up there.
Wonderful! Very powerful--as such things of the heart do tend to be.
Can't say it any better than these guys... Great poetry here! :)
That belief is such a fearful step.
I like the idea of the other being the link to reality that helps the writer find themselves again.
If I believe...
I will meet incredible poets who bathe the moon in inspiration.
Thanks for letting me share Thursday with you
love..."my heart and I are intertwined" speaks very nicely to the soul...bkm
I swear you get into every Lovers head...Very sweet, very sad, VERY MOON!
Thank You for sharing that fantastic creative talent with us all....G
Unrequited, hopeful, and yet the trepidation...
That's cool how you pulled the entire poem around from so many questions into those clever last lines that sound very well-placed.
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