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Sunday, 4 July 2010

The Secret: A Poem In 160 Characters


The Secret

A hidden kiss that lingered in the mote
Whilst lovers would sit too close to touch
Their eyes told tales and spoke of want
As fingers stretched and gently brushed.

by Pete Marshall

say it in 160 characters, then tell Monkeyman

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11 comments:

  1. Caty4 July 2010 at 15:12

    very nice poem of love!

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  2. Monkey Man4 July 2010 at 15:53

    I was surprised to find your 160 here...pleasantly surprised. Thanks again for playing.

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  3. Maude Lynn4 July 2010 at 15:57

    This is lovely!

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  4. PattiKen4 July 2010 at 16:30

    Oh, I really liked this. It is just lovely.

    Happy 4th.

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  5. Alice Audrey4 July 2010 at 17:20

    And everyone around them knew the secret at a glace.

    Great 160.

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  6. Brian Miller4 July 2010 at 18:30

    nice 160 pete...think this one is going to explode with desire pretty soon. smiles.

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  7. Enchanted Oak4 July 2010 at 22:42

    A lotta love in 160!
    Sunday 160

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  8. moondustwriter5 July 2010 at 04:51

    Excellent in 160 - but you speak loudly with 160 char or 160 words

    it's gonna be a gr8 week
    Pete

    moon smiles

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  9. artswebshow6 July 2010 at 13:37

    this is excellent pete

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  10. R.S Mallari6 July 2010 at 16:08

    So you were able to condensed a romantic moment in 160 characters. Love it.

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  11. heatblast927 July 2010 at 09:54

    Great one! :)

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