tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post7198250278516692742..comments2023-09-02T15:52:37.700+01:00Comments on One Stop Poetry - Where Poets, Writers and Artists Meet: Moondustwriter's Thursday - guest featuring Dave HollowayOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-57422834963700636142010-09-10T14:44:10.597+01:002010-09-10T14:44:10.597+01:00Yes, I loved each poem. You have to dive deep to ...Yes, I loved each poem. You have to dive deep to be able to write these works. To open to the "mind's eye."<br />Thanks.annell4https://www.blogger.com/profile/07629830133868270690noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-44862979985874308022010-09-10T01:22:02.863+01:002010-09-10T01:22:02.863+01:00great poems! thanks so much for sharing :)great poems! thanks so much for sharing :)Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-39416533221628699402010-09-10T00:38:39.427+01:002010-09-10T00:38:39.427+01:00i like "bent"i like "bent"Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-51226551976898923742010-09-10T00:38:02.657+01:002010-09-10T00:38:02.657+01:00thank you for sharing
mr. holloway's poems.thank you for sharing<br />mr. holloway's poems.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-22510883827663888322010-09-09T22:14:27.258+01:002010-09-09T22:14:27.258+01:00that was a fantastic poem, this place is renowned ...that was a fantastic poem, this place is renowned for talent, I think this poem is near the top of the creme :)william mansonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01127816115228181041noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-9621010978721736272010-09-09T20:43:44.779+01:002010-09-09T20:43:44.779+01:00enjoyed the two poems - thanks leslie for introduc...enjoyed the two poems - thanks leslie for introducing david to us - and glad he was there to encourage you<br /><br />i think it's something very valuable to have people who stretch us, ask us questions about our poetry and help us develop (and may be a bit uncomfortable at times)<br />i had some people commenting on my posts with real good input and suggestions to improve - like "you change tenses and it distracts me as a reader" or " 3 a.m. in the morning - take away the a.m. - it's redundant" or "Try to go directly to the sight, feeling, sound, or action- that builds up intensity"<br /><br />and i just found someone who offered to comment on my posts and give me an honest feedback, suggestions how to look at my poems- asking questions i might not have asked myself and might not like but i'm just thankful because i think it helps to growClaudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-49277069977930903132010-09-09T18:37:23.728+01:002010-09-09T18:37:23.728+01:00No answers for your question. I am glad you highl...No answers for your question. I am glad you highlighted Dave, his poetry is very real.<br /><br />smiles,Jessiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11173809658342411265noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-19102705345510616632010-09-09T15:33:01.305+01:002010-09-09T15:33:01.305+01:00You need to know Pete Marshall is always picking u...You need to know Pete Marshall is always picking up my blog messes. I often can't get my posts to look right. Pete patiently comes in and does his magic.<br /><br />Thanks for being there Pete - CheersOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-44478320598781867692010-09-09T15:16:31.021+01:002010-09-09T15:16:31.021+01:00two wonderful poems that have been shared today......two wonderful poems that have been shared today...makes you wonder what other beauties would be lurking in his drawers and minds...<br /><br />as for a mentor dont know if i could say i have one directly but indirectly i would say the poetry communities that i have become part of other the last 8 months of writing have most certainly encouraged me...so thanks to all of you that takes the time to comment on my workMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-84517363954097799272010-09-09T15:05:00.395+01:002010-09-09T15:05:00.395+01:00Incredible work by Dave Holloway, thanks for shari...Incredible work by Dave Holloway, thanks for sharing this with us Leslie! :) ~ In the idea of mentors there are many, all of the talents that flow around me day to day....the many things that help and inspire me.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-87339662541651321262010-09-09T13:09:23.914+01:002010-09-09T13:09:23.914+01:00Enjoyed Dave's poems very much and the backgro...Enjoyed Dave's poems very much and the background info was interesting, Moon. Quite a life he's led. Love that last stanza to 100 Years Ago.<br />To answer you question, never had a writing mentor.dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-17453156664201110282010-09-09T11:52:13.055+01:002010-09-09T11:52:13.055+01:00none really at this point...i have just been figur...none really at this point...i have just been figuring it out as i go along...i do have one that has been tstretching me a bit though this last year...<br /><br />really enjoyed davids poetry and glad he was there when you needed it..Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-76492721897366003132010-09-09T10:11:57.608+01:002010-09-09T10:11:57.608+01:00I can’t answer your question. I know that I’m not...I can’t answer your question. I know that I’m not a writer as such. I’m just a guy having fun. But I enjoyed this post and especially enjoyed the poems. Thanks for this.<br /><br />Have a nice day, BoonieAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-35737290948839544752010-09-09T07:17:46.014+01:002010-09-09T07:17:46.014+01:00Welcome to Moondustwriter Thursday. So how has a m...Welcome to Moondustwriter Thursday. So how has a mentor helped you in your writing? For once I answered in the text.One Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.com