tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post6378135887938810247..comments2023-09-02T15:52:37.700+01:00Comments on One Stop Poetry - Where Poets, Writers and Artists Meet: The Dawn Chorus: A Poem By Pete MarshallOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comBlogger17125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-87947343824508518412010-08-04T21:26:46.100+01:002010-08-04T21:26:46.100+01:00Wow! You made camping sound attractive to me . . ....Wow! You made camping sound attractive to me . . . the one who thinks camping out is staying at a motel! Lovely poem. Thanks!JamieDedeshttp://musingbymoonlight.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-51163693602084860962010-08-02T04:17:15.502+01:002010-08-02T04:17:15.502+01:00Love this piece Peter, all the image and sounds ar...Love this piece Peter, all the image and sounds are felt and real as the bacon is frying...the rhythm of the poem is delightful....bkmsigned...bkmhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03558304976280070986noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-78442219592174580642010-08-02T02:21:06.728+01:002010-08-02T02:21:06.728+01:00You captured the camping moments, sights and sound...You captured the camping moments, sights and sounds all in this poem. Exquisite Pete i felt myself there camping with you...great imagery~<br /><br />Wild Rose/@LarvK~Wild Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05260455210731142858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-80922412147456814592010-08-01T23:47:07.597+01:002010-08-01T23:47:07.597+01:00Oh yeah... and a magical time was had by all. Fabu...Oh yeah... and a magical time was had by all. Fabulous, Pete. :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-3362733840824538102010-08-01T20:26:20.893+01:002010-08-01T20:26:20.893+01:00This is just beautiful, Pete, like a dispatch from...This is just beautiful, Pete, like a dispatch from the edge of paradise. I really like the birds soaring low over the landscape.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-60140670046781941452010-08-01T20:01:35.510+01:002010-08-01T20:01:35.510+01:00thanks all of you for your great comments...and gu...thanks all of you for your great comments...and guess what it didnt turn into a nightmare LOL...the trip was fantastic..a week under the stars and it rained only once..we are home, inspired and....shattered..LOLMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-30687361202852331942010-08-01T17:46:16.617+01:002010-08-01T17:46:16.617+01:00Thanks so much for this Pete. The vividness of thi...Thanks so much for this Pete. The vividness of this piece is breathtaking!!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-62084660237115171602010-08-01T02:00:13.751+01:002010-08-01T02:00:13.751+01:00Wow...this one got me!! I felt as if I was there!!...Wow...this one got me!! I felt as if I was there!! Thanks so much, you are so very talented. Have a great weekend my friend.Amandahttp://buttercup600.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-68527009343160201452010-08-01T00:59:14.918+01:002010-08-01T00:59:14.918+01:00that sounds absolutely magical and charming!that sounds absolutely magical and charming!Catyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13203872150946002183noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-22469034935761386972010-08-01T00:22:24.906+01:002010-08-01T00:22:24.906+01:00So lyrical! And full of joy. And it makes me want ...So lyrical! And full of joy. And it makes me want to head out to the great outdoors immediately!TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-16751869176346461092010-07-31T15:52:04.827+01:002010-07-31T15:52:04.827+01:00Such a lovely moment shared here, for you, for us ...Such a lovely moment shared here, for you, for us who read your lovely words. Thank you. Heartspellheartspellhttp://heartspell.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-19087764017835578902010-07-31T15:43:01.123+01:002010-07-31T15:43:01.123+01:00Think you just got everyone looking forward to a c...Think you just got everyone looking forward to a camping trip... Great poem. Now I want to go too! lol<br />cheersdustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-69214019667112089212010-07-31T14:16:57.643+01:002010-07-31T14:16:57.643+01:00you got my senses Pete..! now i want to go camping...you got my senses Pete..! now i want to go camping too..:)) wonderful poem,you put the words in the right spots..well done! loved it..;)Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-26389412049900600372010-07-31T11:14:42.573+01:002010-07-31T11:14:42.573+01:00sounds like a wonderful morning camping pete...had...sounds like a wonderful morning camping pete...had many of those the year i lived in the woods...and relive it as often as i can...Brian Millerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00722940075884718007noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-2457335474947395342010-07-31T09:27:24.313+01:002010-07-31T09:27:24.313+01:00Pete:
A really lovely romantic poem about the thr...Pete:<br /><br />A really lovely romantic poem about the thrill of camping, at least I think it is. The smell of the campfire, the misty dewy morning air, and the sweet smell of damp earth, the birds flying by, I miss camping. Sigh, In the PNW the outdoors is our church our cathedral.<br /><br />You got me hooked on your words from the first sentence on...<br />Joannyjoannahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03338150531816845279noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-20738241827096629072010-07-31T08:42:05.140+01:002010-07-31T08:42:05.140+01:00oh wow - this sounds like a magical camping trip i...oh wow - this sounds like a magical camping trip indeed!<br />how beautiful you managed to capture all the smells and tastes and emotions...made my morning!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-17217124001512541122010-07-31T06:54:06.441+01:002010-07-31T06:54:06.441+01:00Thanks Pete- I want to go camping. Love all the sm...Thanks Pete- I want to go camping. Love all the smells and feeling you conveyed in the Dawn Chorus<br /><br />Hope it was fun<br /><br />Hugs from the MoonOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.com