tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post1802109106406480711..comments2023-09-02T15:52:37.700+01:00Comments on One Stop Poetry - Where Poets, Writers and Artists Meet: One Stop Spotlight: Mind Dream a Poem by Shaun Gordon aka DonushoOne Stop - The Place For Poets, Writers and Artistshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07020684469937853500noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-4370763251540087242010-10-05T21:52:42.669+01:002010-10-05T21:52:42.669+01:00This was incredible. Very well written!!!! Much en...This was incredible. Very well written!!!! Much enjoyed reading this. I'm up for more!! Dreams are amazing places and times.... :) ~AprilAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-82087721118398526962010-10-05T13:28:05.171+01:002010-10-05T13:28:05.171+01:00Its really a wonderful poem and yes I did check th...Its really a wonderful poem and yes I did check the image... too..<br /><br />ॐ नमः शिवाय<br />Om Namah ShivayaShashidhar Sharmahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10752054354309206121noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-20801935521978664692010-10-05T05:43:07.492+01:002010-10-05T05:43:07.492+01:00Wow, thank you very much everyone.Just reached New...Wow, thank you very much everyone.Just reached New York in one piece or peace and looking forward to the break away.<br /><br />Once again a very big humble thank you to you all and one shot poetry.<br /><br />DonushoAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-11201064875291576172010-10-05T03:09:10.679+01:002010-10-05T03:09:10.679+01:00Donusho's poetry always captivates me. There&#...Donusho's poetry always captivates me. There's a rawness and an honesty that shines through and his observations of life around him are always intriguing. Fabulous choice for spotlighting, Brian!TALONhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03205633556998220372noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-54204279336667126912010-10-04T23:14:48.201+01:002010-10-04T23:14:48.201+01:00Shaun - That was a chess game for life. I love the...Shaun - That was a chess game for life. I love the probing into motives and purpose in this piece. It's a perfect poem to feature. Will enjoy reading you as you continue to stretch and inspire the mind.<br /><br />and thanks Bri<br /><br />Moon smilesmoondustwriterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09848554806751678968noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-26079981910694170272010-10-04T22:09:03.952+01:002010-10-04T22:09:03.952+01:00I enjoyed it, and agree with all the comments befo...I enjoyed it, and agree with all the comments before me..good work..One shot to youKodjo Deynoohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01299996598769756878noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-58905402774879296322010-10-04T18:23:09.046+01:002010-10-04T18:23:09.046+01:00wow shaun - what a dream! you almost take us into ...wow shaun - what a dream! you almost take us into some kind of war scene in a movie - great write<br />..and i enjoyed your poem for one shot and the video when you cut your hair off..<br /><br />thanks brian for spotlighting!Claudiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03011763027311966186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-22371895503815364282010-10-04T16:54:29.183+01:002010-10-04T16:54:29.183+01:00Fantastic dream, so well expressed - vivid imagery...Fantastic dream, so well expressed - vivid imagery, spot-on mood, the dark forms menacing, the bones, the limbs. A highly intelligent and comprehensive rendering of an amazing dream. The poet's mind must be a fantastic place to hang out in:)Impressive.Sherry Blue Skyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10769154286598233146noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-81445555286962944902010-10-04T16:43:06.407+01:002010-10-04T16:43:06.407+01:00Simply beautitfulSimply beautitfulTyeishahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01690528620256408422noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-76034194018360760462010-10-04T13:19:24.561+01:002010-10-04T13:19:24.561+01:00Have enjoyed reading Donusho's poetry since he...Have enjoyed reading Donusho's poetry since he began posting for OSW and agree with Brian's introductory compliments about his work. Mind Dream....quite a vivid one. "'What is this all about!?' / 'I shouldn't be here!'" Reminds of lucid dreams—well expressed. Great way to kick of the week!dustushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07796500077556153584noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-14901186468859748622010-10-04T12:18:16.784+01:002010-10-04T12:18:16.784+01:00Truely humbled and very glad you appreciate my wor...Truely humbled and very glad you appreciate my work. Thank you very much for introducing me to the world on Spotlight. Happy Monday All!!Donushohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04157642247101955330noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-26709513705273454702010-10-04T11:41:04.862+01:002010-10-04T11:41:04.862+01:00that was a good read!minds are powerful along with...that was a good read!minds are powerful along with those words..i believe this poem is a BRILLIANT Spotlight! :) thanks Donusho a true masterpiece!Desert Rosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17370899545012572162noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4998981984340553400.post-38610954047396161002010-10-04T11:28:59.983+01:002010-10-04T11:28:59.983+01:00when shaun first appeared at one shot, about 6 wee...when shaun first appeared at one shot, about 6 weeks ago, he left a great impression, and each time he is here his work is of an amazingly high standard.Shaun is a mighty fine poet, heading for great things, this is a great One Stop Spotlight..cheers BriMarshyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08029232967141290634noreply@blogger.com